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Post by Raltsbuddy on Sun Mar 09, 2008 7:09 pm

This is a story I started in 5th grade. Very nice,production's kinda halted though,and MAYBE,I might finish it.
Pokemon Diamond And Pearl Adventures-Book 1 Welcome all. This is the revison version of PKMN D & P adventures I wrote. Well,enjoy this.

Backround:Harry is a smart,lovable trainer who lives in Pallet town and has beaten Kanto,Johto,and Hoenn Leuages before. His best friend,David,and wannabe girlfriend,Shelbie,have traveled throut these lands.

Well,here ya go. Chapter 1:A whole new day
Our story begins as "BEEP BEEP BEEP!!" my alarm clock rang. "ARRGH!!" I hate Mondays!!!" I yelled. I got out of bed,pulled some cloths on,grabbed a pop-tart and said "Hey mom,I'm going to David's!!!!" I ran out of my house and walked over to David's window. "WAKE UUUUUUUUP LAZYBONES!!!" I yelled. "Au Curumbah!" David said. "Morning David!!" I yelled. "Wait outside!!" he said as he ran downstairs. "So,you ready TO ROCK!!!" I said. "You could say that.." David said. "Let's go wake up Shelb." He said. "Ok" I responded. We walked there,and a horrible PKMN walked in front of us!! "ELEKID!!" It yelled. Chapter 2:A shocking surprise!!!
"I'm gunna catch it!!" David said. "Poke Ball!!!" it shook,and Elekid was captured. "Awesome!!" David exclaimed. "Yup." I said. We got to Shelb's house,and she was ready to go. "Hi guys!" she said. "C'mon!!" I yelled. Since she respects me so much,I yell at her and she dpesn't get angry. "Ok." She said. We were heading to Vermillion where the ship to Sinnoh was. "I'm ready!!" I shouted.

Later.......
There's the dock!!" Shelbie shouted. We hurried,and we got on just in time. "Weew!" David said. Chapter 3:1# fan
We were alll walking along when suddenly,a girl with a Northeastern accent and brown hair came up shouting "I LOVE YOU!!!!" She came up to me,hugging me,and tried to kiss me until Shelbie yelled "GET AWAY FROM MY BOYFRIEND!!!!" she yelled. "Oh my gosh,I can't belive you're HERE!!!" the girl said. "Who are you??" I asked. "Why I'm Sarah,your #1 fan." She said. I noticed she was wearing a T-shirt that said:"Harrison's BOYFRIEND!!" in a Luvdisc drawn on there. "He's my boyfriend!!" Shelbie yelled back. "Oh yeah!!" she yelled back. "AH CURUMBA!!!" David said. "Break it up,right Harry?" and he noticed I was gone hiding behind a plant. Chapter 4:Land Ho!!

I came up from the plant. Girls uh..look!! A UFO!!" They looked and I ran. David caught up with me and we noticed we hit land. Shelbie came next. "Come on!!" I said. Sarah came behind us with a Cat-Like Pkmn by her leg. What's that??" I asked. "A Glameow. I got it when it was only a kitten." So Harry,you're in the Sinnoh leauge now?? I'm here for the contests." She said. "WHAT!! YOU STEAL MY BOYFRIEND AND GLORY??" Shelb yelled. Sarah started to run and yelled:"See ya at the Jubilife contest,honey!!" She said to me. Chapter 5:Turtwig,Chimchar,and Piplup

As we started walking,I said:"That girl was CRAAAAZY!" "You got that right!" David said. "Ah well,let's go to Twinleaf town to see Prof. Rowan!!" I said. Shelb loooked kinda mad. "What's wrong??" I asked. "Lousy Sarah!" She said as tear came out of her eyes. "Never mind" I say. "Hey-there's the lab!!" David said. "Last one there Is a rotton egg!!!!" As we steped inside,a tall,serious looking man greeted us. "You must be the kids Prof. Oak told me about." "Yep!" we all said. "Ok,come in this room here,and you can choose your PKMN" he said. I got Chimchar,David chose Turtwig,and Shelb got Piplup. "Chim!" "Turtwig!!" "Lup!" the pkmn said. Chapter 6:Chimchar wins!!!
"Hey,David,I wannna battle!!" I yelled. "Ok." He said. "Chimchar,come out!!" "Chim!!" It yelled. "Elekid!!" David yelled. "Ele!" Chimchar,ember!!" I yelled. Chimchar shot little flames from his mouth. It hit Elekid back. "Thunder Shock!!" David yelled. Chimchar got hit,but got back up. "Brick Break!!" I yelled. Elekid got knocked out. "Go.Turtwig!!" David yelled. "Turtwig!!" the little PKMN said. "Razor Leaf!!" David yelled. "Chimchar,use Fire Spin to burn the leaves. "What??" Shelbie asked. "Haha!" I said as burnt leaves were on the ground. "Flame wheel!!" I yelled to Chimchar. Turtwig was knocked out. "Aww maan." David said. Suddenly,a bird swooped down and started squaking. I took out my PokeDex and it said: "Starly,the gray starling PKMN." "Wow!!" I exclaimed. "I'm gunna catch it,Chimchar,use Flamethrower!" Starly was knocked over. "POKEBALL!" It shook 3 times and.... Chapter 7:Jealousy Battle
"I caught Starly!!" I yelled. "Nice job,honey!!" someone said. I looked behind me,and saw Sarah. "Oh no!" Shelbie said. "So look who it is,little Shelb!" Sarah said. "Listen everyone!!" She then said. "Harry,will you go on a date with me to a fancy resturant in Jubilife??" She asked. Then Shelbie interuppted her. "OH YEAH???" BACK OFF!" Shelbie yelled. "Piplup,come out!!!!!" Shelbie yelled. "Glameow,battle!!" Sarah yelled. "Winner takes Harry out tonight!!" Sarah said. "Piplup,pound!!" Shelbie yelled. "Glameow,Shadow Claw!!" Sarah yelled. The attacks collided. "Peck now Piplup!!" Shelb yelled. "Scratch!!" Sarah yelled. "Ice Beam,Pip!!" finally,both of the PKMN got knocked out. "What happend??: they asked. "It's a tie!!" Now both go away!" I yelled. I ran off.
I will add more......MAYBE!! Question

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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by Guest on Mon Mar 10, 2008 1:02 am

wow, nice and long story hope you add to it

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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by Raltsbuddy on Mon Mar 10, 2008 9:33 pm

Thanks. I'm continuing this,I just gotta refresh my mind on the plot,characters,etc. I will continue tomorrow,I'm working on the Jubilife contest part. Very Happy

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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by Chill Agent on Mon Mar 17, 2008 9:16 pm

Add more! It's really good. I also made a story, a few months ago. I'll look for it and post it!
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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by DavidThan on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:05 pm

i jsut noticed sumthin wat grade r u now if they just came out with pokemon d.p o.o
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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by Chill Agent on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:14 pm

5th grade for him was like, 5 years ago
-Just because I have a natural tendancy to do or say something stupid, doesn't mean I am stupid. Wait, maybe it does. But don't call me stupid. I get sad easily. What? You called me stupid? Who cares, it's not like I get sad easily.

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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by Pinkkirby93 on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:16 pm

lol, no hes not 15, i think hes 12 i know him because we go to the same school, hes in 6th grade

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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by Chill Agent on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:18 pm

so that was one year ago?
-Just because I have a natural tendancy to do or say something stupid, doesn't mean I am stupid. Wait, maybe it does. But don't call me stupid. I get sad easily. What? You called me stupid? Who cares, it's not like I get sad easily.

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Post by DavidThan on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:36 pm

wth so ur like? how old im 12 lol o btw im a guy -_- i swear sum ppl call me she
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Post by Chill Agent on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:40 pm

thats giving out personal info, so dont do it
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Post by DavidThan on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:48 pm

but it doesnt matter if i give out age it already says it under my avatar -_-
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Post by Chill Agent on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:56 pm

NO PERSONAL INFO! please
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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by pkmnmasterman on Thu Mar 27, 2008 6:00 pm

didn't the story have more chapters

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Post by Ovi on Thu Mar 27, 2008 8:57 pm

nice story when are making more
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Re: ThSinnoh adventure od Harry,David,and Shelbie

Post by GSL dude96 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:24 pm

i read some of it and it's a good story

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