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My story Chaos World.

Post by Ovi on Tue Apr 01, 2008 10:39 pm

You know the new book I was telling people about here is of it here it is some of it ok tell me your opionin and be truthful

Chaos World
Chaos World is a place for creatures named Chaos’ to live. There is a story to this world and I am about to tell it.
There once was a world named Chaos World. There where creatures in that world that names where Chaos’, there where six tribes to where does creatures where from. The tribes where, the Fire tribe, the River tribe, the Light tribe, the Shadow tribe, The Sky tribe, and the Nature tribe. And in each tribe there where two minor tribes in each tribe. In the Fire tribe there was the Pyro tribe and the Phoenix tribe, in the River tribe there was the swamp tribe and the Aqua tribe, in the Light tribe there was the Guardian tribe and the Hero tribe, in the Shadow tribe there was the Dark tribe, and the Night tribe, in the Sky tribe there was the Wind tribe and the lightning tribe, in the Nature tribe there was the Jungle tribe and the Chronicle tribe. Those are the existing tribes. There where many other tribe but they have died out because of many reasons.
But there where evil Chaos’ who gathered armies and forced all the Chaos to join them or destroy them. There where some who resisted and tried to take down the dictators, but all of them failed. So this is where the story starts.
Each of the tribes is fighting each other to gain glory, honor, and power, but all it is doing is destruction. Some tribes see that this is just doing harm so they don’t fight, but are forced to fight when they get attacked. The Shadow tribe is mainly in control because of the evil leaders who like that tribe and work in that tribe. The Light tribe and the Nature tribe are resisting to war, but it is not going the way they wanted. The Chaos World is linked to Earth, but that link vanished somehow, nobody knows how. The evil Chaos wants to go to Earth (or as they call it, Human World). The other tribes disagree with this and it goes to war. There once was a powerful, kingly, fair, nice, king Chaos, but he got overruled by evil Chaos and nobody has seen him or know were he is now.
The problem that the link to Earth is opening and now a war with the humans and the Chaos may come. Who would save them from the evil Chaos and the war with the humans?[center][right]
you can run and hide but from Destiny your faith is decided you can't run or hide from destiny because it will catch you. but watch the power of Destiny it is stronger than mother nature or anything this earth can do because Destiny is the thing that strikes as fast as Lightning and is stronger than thunder.

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Re: My story Chaos World.

Post by pkmnmasterman on Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:25 pm

nice story Ovi. and i'm bieng truthful
good job!!

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Re: My story Chaos World.

Post by Ovi on Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:31 pm

thanks for liking it I am working on more of the story now too.
you can run and hide but from Destiny your faith is decided you can't run or hide from destiny because it will catch you. but watch the power of Destiny it is stronger than mother nature or anything this earth can do because Destiny is the thing that strikes as fast as Lightning and is stronger than thunder.

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Post by Pinkkirby93 on Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:48 pm

good good, nice job

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Post by Ovi on Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:45 pm

thanks give any suggestions for some more of the story if you would like
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